"If you write FOR a particular market or FOR a particular editor you will often miss the mark. But if you write because your fingers have danced across the keyboard, because a character has tapped you on the shoulder, because a story has settled in your heart, then even if you never sell it you have done the work you were meant to do. And sometime, dear readers, real magic happens." Jane Yolen

4/2/10

"Contemplating History" - Friday Fiction

Yes - I am STILL on my computer diet - packing/moving is going well, and I've been QUITE scarce here. Not sure when I'll "really" be back, but the "big move" will be either a week from this evening or the next day (things a BIT up in the air). Thanks for your prayers.


Fiction Friday,button,karlene


Welcome to my contribution to Fiction Friday, hosted this week by Karlene at Homespun Expressions. Make sure that you head over to her blog and link up with your own fiction. Or, if you just want to read some great fiction (ALWAYS great in my opinion!), head over to Karlene's blog and check out the links there.

This was an EC winner from the FW writing challenge, AND it is in THIS EASTER'S edition of "The Gem," a Sunday school paper put out by the Church of God general conference (just got a notice, a copy, and a check in the mail yesterday!). And, of course, it reminded me of this poem I wrote (actually, God wrote it, cuz there is NO way it was me). It's a fave of mine. Praying it blesses you on this OH-SO APPROPRIATE Good Friday.

CONTEMPLATING HISTORY

A man - jaw set, countenance firm -
looked out in the distance
contemplating history,
recalling events of the past.


They said they loved the Lord,
that God was their Father.
Yet, Adam and Eve disobeyed,
eating of the forbidden tree.

And the man pursed his lips.

He said he would follow God,
that he trusted His direction.
Yet, Abraham bedded Hagar
to sire a son his own way.

And the man cringed.

They praised the Lord for miracles,
declaring their devotion to Him.
Yet the Israelites built an idol in the desert,
bowing low to a calf of gold.

And the man sighed.

He said he would fight for God,
that the Lord was his portion and provision.
Yet, Achan defied God's decrees,
stealing the spoil from his Maker.

And the man clenched his fist.

He said he would rule for God,
that he would lead His people righteously.
Yet, Saul took power into his own hands,
offering an unholy, forbidden sacrifice.

And the man closed his eyes.

He said that God was his shepherd,
that the Lord would meet his every want.
Yet, David sent a man to his death
to satisfy his own lust.

And the man wept.

He said he wanted Godly wisdom,
That he would serve Him only.
Yet, Solomon took wives by the hundreds,
and followed each of their gods.

And the man shook his head.

He was a prophet of the Most High,
speaking His pronouncements far and wide.
Yet, Jonah turned from Ninevah
and entered the great fish's belly.

And the man bowed his head.

They praised God with singing,
celebrating their return to the land.
Yet, the remnant neglected His temple,
letting its gates disintegrate.

And the man bit his lip.

They taught God's Word to the masses,
rebuking those who defied their authority.
Yet, the Pharisees hated His Son,
and worked to destroy Him.

And the man grit his teeth.

He marveled at Christ's miracles,
following and speaking for Him.
Yet Judas betrayed Jesus,
sending Him to death with a kiss.

And the man grimaced.

He said he would never leave Jesus,
declaring Christ was the Son of God.
Yet Peter turned his back on Him,
denying Him thrice in one night.

And the man scanned the crowd.

They said they were God's chosen,
following His laws and precepts.
Yet, the crowd rejected God's Son,
condemning Him to death on a cross.

And the Man examined His hands and feet.

"It is finished," He cried, and He gave up His spirit.
At that moment, the curtain of the temple
was torn in two from top to bottom.



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Based on Genesis 3 and 16, Exodus 32, Joshua 7, 1 Samuel 13, 2 Samuel 11, 1 Kings 11, Jonah 1, Nehemiah, and the four Gospel accounts.

The direct Bible reference is taken from John 19:30 and Matthew 27:50b-51.

Thanks for reading! Be sure to stop by Karlene's blog for more great fiction.

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6 comments:

  1. Take care!!! You and family are in our thoughts and prayers!

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  2. Well done, very inspired! Congrats on the EC win!

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  3. Very nice progression. Nice to see you back on Friday Fiction!

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  4. Bear likes this Contemplating History much! It illustrated the depths of humanity's sin so well, and how all our good intentions and pledges of love and obedience, can so easily become compromised. The "It is Finished" forgiveness from the cross despite it all, is awesome! Congrats on a well deserved sale! :-)

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