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The Good Witches - Fiction Friday

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I was absolutely FASCINATED with the research I had to do on this story, which I submitted to the FaithWriters' Writing Challenge during the infamous "genre quarter." I was somewhat familiar with the history of this time, but had no idea of some of the details. This is based on actual people--especially the MC. Hope you enjoy, and learn something.

The Good Witches

"I don't like it one bit! My mama ain't a witch." Dorothy Good put her hands on her hips and gritted her teeth.

Her father, William Good, rapped her on the head and put his finger over his lips. "You watch your tongue in public, girl. And you get started on dinner. You got to be the woman of the family for a while now."

"Yes, papa."

Dorothy bowed her head and walked away from the Salem town square toward a small campfire in the abutting woods. There she started a couple onions and a potato boiling in a stew pot over the fire. Despite being only four years old, her mother had already taught her how to prepare a hearty meal out of anything she could get her hands on. The onions were growing alongside the edge of the woods, and she'd snagged the potato off the ground in front of Samuel's Grocer, where a customer had likely dropped it.

"Just because mama gets mad sometimes and talks to herself don't mean the devil's got her," Dorothy mumbled, stirring the meager provisions with a stick she'd picked up. "Do I ever miss her."

Her father approached the fire and sat beside it.


"What, child?"

Dorothy stopped stirring the vegetables and looked straight into her father's eyes. "Are they ever gonna let mama outta that jail?"

He sighed. "I dunno. If she's guilty of witchcraft they sure won't."

Dorothy's eyes were afire. "But she isn't, papa. She isn't!"

Her father shrugged.


Dorothy, accustomed to joining her mother begging for food and shelter from the locals, had given up on seeking assistance from the townsfolk more than a week previous. Whenever she approached anyone, it seemed they gave her disapproving looks or called her a witch. Papa had warned her to stay away from the locals, lest she be arrested as well.

Instead, she spent much of her time in the woods, venturing into the town square only to get food or some other necessity.

"Look! It's the devil's spawn!" A girl in her early teens walked toward Samuel's Grocer, where Dorothy was scanning the walk in front of the shop for dropped goods.

"Am not, Miss Ann Putnam. And my mama is NOT a witch." Dorothy kicked dirt at her accuser.

Gasping, Ann wagged her finger at the girl. "How dare you. I'll make sure you're sorry you even spoke to me, you little witch."


"An apple!" Dorothy picked the shiny piece of fruit off the ground and brushed it off with the edge of her ragged skirt. "Papa will be pleased."

Inspecting the apple closely as she ambled down the street, the girl bumped her shoulder against a man about as tall as her father.

"'Scuse me," she mumbled under her breath, trying to hurry back into the woods.

"Come here, little lady." The gentleman put out his hand.

Dorothy paused and glanced about, debating whether to approach the man or run away. His smile convinced her to do the former.

"Yes sir?" she asked in her most polite voice.

The man's smile quickly turned to a smirk as he grabbed the girl and began carrying her toward the Salem courthouse.

"Dorothy Good, you are under arrest for afflicting another with witchcraft."

Dorothy kicked and screamed, but was unable to wiggle out of the man's grasp.

"Just like her mother," the officer growled as he placed her in a holding cell. "Just like her mother."

Author's note: Dorothy Good, age four, was arrested and interrogated in late March of 1692 and held in a Boston prison for 9 months in chains. She was the youngest person arrested for witchcraft during the Salem Witch trials, and, according to her father William, was permanently damaged from her ordeal. Her mother, Sarah Good, was one of the first women arrested for witchcraft in Salem in early March of 1692, and was executed by hanging in mid-July of the same year.

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  1. A very dark and sad chapter in American and Church history. Sadly, one of my ancestors was one of the prosecutors for the Salem Witch Trials. Reading the "evidence" presented against accused witches was mind-boggling. Your story does an excellent job of putting a face on the falsely accused.

  2. Ooh, well done! This is a good reminder of how easy it is to get caught up in the latest cause or prohibition, and then to justify it in the name of Christ. I always love your stories!

  3. So sad... now our country has swung the other way and embracing witchcraft.

  4. I played Mary Warren in my high school production of The Crucibal. Fascinating, isn't it? Well told story!

  5. Well, gosh! Here I was, thinking our comments needed to make sense, and then Anonymous comes along and shows that we could have all posted brain-dead gibberish!

    Do you suppose a witch turned his brain into a newt? Or would that be an improvement?

  6. Wow, what a sad tale, to be sure! Very well written.

  7. Ah, yes. I remember this one, so very sad for poor Dorothy. Excellently written though. ^_^

  8. Jo, this one ALWAYS gives me chills!! Always!

  9. Oh, Jo, CHILLS! This dark period in our country's history grieves me. Super job on this story!

  10. I remember this one, and just as thought provoking this time around. I read a lot on this period in history as a high schooler, and Yvonne is right, now we embrace witchcraft as a society.

    Thanks for hosting, and praying for you with the 35 K!

  11. Am I losing my mind or have I read this before? Regardless, still great! It was a fascinating, yet tragic era in human history. One that captures my attention on so many fronts.



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