tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post739157075937795093..comments2024-01-12T18:05:30.697-05:00Comments on Joanne Sher: Editor/Proofreader : Friday Fiction: "In My View"Joanne Sherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07656727089667265580noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-40507928648775738932008-07-27T15:59:00.000-04:002008-07-27T15:59:00.000-04:00I remember this one! Very emotional story with a h...I remember this one! Very emotional story with a hopeful ending. I look forward to seeing the variation of this in your book.Joshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04675826203911377585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-72612472396647220432008-07-27T15:45:00.000-04:002008-07-27T15:45:00.000-04:00This one is so special, Joanne! I love it! and I...This one is so special, Joanne! I love it! and I'm glad to hear it will be in your book! (LoL--at least a variation of it. *grin*)Patty Wysonghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01689649950598288481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-59076805188317240902008-07-26T20:33:00.000-04:002008-07-26T20:33:00.000-04:00This is one of those that leaves a lump in the thr...This is one of those that leaves a lump in the throat and doesn't go away for awhile. As the writer, it's a very high compliment. I so enjoy your work.Julie Arduinihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08658926809120105714noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-78407756116947863722008-07-25T15:47:00.000-04:002008-07-25T15:47:00.000-04:00What a beautiful story, Joanne! From the first lin...What a beautiful story, Joanne! From the first line to the last, your writing talent shines. Touched me to the core. Wonderful!Lynda Lee Schabhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05827732317985384301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-32908900187747036542008-07-25T12:49:00.000-04:002008-07-25T12:49:00.000-04:00Oh my goodness, Joanne, this was such a wonderful ...Oh my goodness, Joanne, this was such a wonderful and touching story. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. I relly felt like I was with them. I'm so glad that he was able to see his daughter! BlessingsTracyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17118658154554731805noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-59020826619370913852008-07-25T10:49:00.000-04:002008-07-25T10:49:00.000-04:00Wow! Very vivid descriptions, I could definitely '...Wow! Very vivid descriptions, I could definitely 'be' there, it was so real, especially the father's POV. Nicely done! ^_^Sara Harricharanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07050427684753490067noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-45921033920689041402008-07-25T08:33:00.000-04:002008-07-25T08:33:00.000-04:00You made me cry! Oh my, you painted this scene so ...You made me cry! Oh my, you painted this scene so vividly. Love this line...<I>I'll be fine," I say with a confidence I don't feel. </I> Perfect, and I love that you wrote it with a happy ending.LauraLee Shawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06092672958394657296noreply@blogger.com