tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post377443576649296761..comments2024-01-12T18:05:30.697-05:00Comments on Joanne Sher: Editor/Proofreader : Friday Fiction: "Fifty-Five Years Broken"Joanne Sherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07656727089667265580noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-83978184322483222182009-05-08T23:19:00.000-04:002009-05-08T23:19:00.000-04:00This had me hooked at the first sentence. Wonderfu...This had me hooked at the first sentence. Wonderfully done, Joanne. I LOVED this!Billy Coffeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08988347213957444145noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-58281760072473067202009-05-08T19:53:00.000-04:002009-05-08T19:53:00.000-04:00I remember this story VERY well. I judged that wee...I remember this story VERY well. I judged that week at FaithWriters and was very impressed then. This story has so much depth, and your characterization is wonderful! I felt like I was inside the MC's head. Applause!!!Catrina Bradleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759918426263780732noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-10975651929993286002009-05-08T16:21:00.000-04:002009-05-08T16:21:00.000-04:00Yes, the broken brother was more whole! I love ho...Yes, the broken brother was more whole! I love how your MC came to that conclusion and wanted to do something about it. Such a touching story, Joanne!Sharlyn Guthriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01879828989850465268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-62098220606871180882009-05-08T14:12:00.000-04:002009-05-08T14:12:00.000-04:00What a lovely story and great message. This one r...What a lovely story and great message. This one really touched me. Well done!Shelley Ledforshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14885568214191569590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-38753519268430329812009-05-08T12:58:00.000-04:002009-05-08T12:58:00.000-04:00Wow, what a great illustration of stubbornly stayi...Wow, what a great illustration of stubbornly staying like we are, or giving up that which is killing us anyway to let Him into our hearts.Sherri Wardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02370897359440297281noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-51640628304206490902009-05-08T12:39:00.000-04:002009-05-08T12:39:00.000-04:00Excellent, Joanne. This was a terrific read, with ...Excellent, Joanne. This was a terrific read, with just the right amount of emotional twist.Hoomihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02973191696885626922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-89081561017061589132009-05-08T09:45:00.000-04:002009-05-08T09:45:00.000-04:00This is wonderful. What a great picture of God's i...This is wonderful. What a great picture of God's influence on our lives and what happens when we let something else rule.Lynn Squirehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17493660128797850584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-27522341544441560132009-05-08T08:49:00.000-04:002009-05-08T08:49:00.000-04:00Wow, I missed this the first time around I think. ...Wow, I missed this the first time around I think. <br /><br />And who could forget you during vacation?<br /><br />Thanks for participating.Julie Arduinihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08658926809120105714noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-43051502784366946062009-05-08T08:17:00.000-04:002009-05-08T08:17:00.000-04:00Bitterness and anger do that to a person. Good one...Bitterness and anger do that to a person. Good one, JoDear!Patty Wysonghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01689649950598288481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-33764753425092346442009-05-08T07:07:00.000-04:002009-05-08T07:07:00.000-04:00Beautiful touching story, JO!Beautiful touching story, JO!Yvonne Blakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08710596077769759997noreply@blogger.com