tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post6384025324328705957..comments2024-01-12T18:05:30.697-05:00Comments on Joanne Sher: Editor/Proofreader : Friday Fiction: "Flee?"Joanne Sherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07656727089667265580noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-63047313869289724202009-04-29T09:12:00.000-04:002009-04-29T09:12:00.000-04:00Cute . . . very, very cute! Totally enjoyed this ...Cute . . . very, very cute! Totally enjoyed this read. Thanks for a smile this morning, Joanne.Teresa Lee Rainey . . .https://www.blogger.com/profile/16675464473320511318noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-18181401893165186842009-04-28T12:26:00.000-04:002009-04-28T12:26:00.000-04:00I love this one, Jo! It's such a fun a read! You h...I love this one, Jo! It's such a fun a read! You had me totally the first time I read it, and it was a wonderful treat to read it here!!!<br /><br />Huggles!Patty Wysonghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01689649950598288481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-28875883869515219822009-04-28T03:40:00.000-04:002009-04-28T03:40:00.000-04:00I was thinking "rabbits" until the mist part--then...I was thinking "rabbits" until the mist part--then I couldn't think of anything "misty" that would hurt bunnies, but I knew it had to mean something! Very clever, Jo!Dee Yoderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09496759876816112506noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-67424294536760495472009-04-26T18:53:00.000-04:002009-04-26T18:53:00.000-04:00Oh man, that is so clever! I thought this was goi...Oh man, that is so clever! I thought this was going to be a holocaust survivor story, and O-G-D was God...you led me down the wrong path on several levels! Incredibly clever!Betsy Markmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13600148899348868100noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-7121135665907929132009-04-26T18:37:00.000-04:002009-04-26T18:37:00.000-04:00I knew they weren't real children but was thinking...I knew they weren't real children but was thinking deer or something. Very good story, as always - and yes, ducking would be a very good idea!Lauryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10265391082131639139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-40000522316646560542009-04-26T16:02:00.000-04:002009-04-26T16:02:00.000-04:00Haha, I remembr that one.Haha, I remembr that one.Sparrowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14784722783493797646noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-5129284491044684742009-04-24T18:16:00.000-04:002009-04-24T18:16:00.000-04:00Okay, kick me right in the noggin. How do you do t...Okay, kick me right in the noggin. How do you do that? lol. INCREDIBLE!LauraLee Shawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06092672958394657296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-46577559009843531182009-04-24T15:56:00.000-04:002009-04-24T15:56:00.000-04:00Giggle, very cute! Nice set up.Giggle, very cute! Nice set up.Sherri Wardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02370897359440297281noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-7351665387347486922009-04-24T14:58:00.000-04:002009-04-24T14:58:00.000-04:00You got me...AGAIN! As soon as I read where they ...You got me...AGAIN! As soon as I read where they were headed I felt the need to kick myself. Such a cute story. I was actually relieved that it wasn't a more serious situation with human characters.Sharlyn Guthriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01879828989850465268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-69736892608829164432009-04-24T14:04:00.000-04:002009-04-24T14:04:00.000-04:00Blessings Joanne...busy day for you with Friday Fi...Blessings Joanne...busy day for you with Friday Fiction! (sorry I did not take the time to read it)<br /><br />I just wanted to let you know that YOU have been chosen as one of my Loyal Commenters this week over at my blog. Please stop by & see today's post. Thanks for being a great commenter! SAY IT FORWARD!<br /><br />I so enjoyed participating in MONDAY MANNA...sorry I overdid it!<br />Just so much came to me like a flood...as I kept that verse before me. Thanks for "An Open Book"! keeps me open and honest unlike you an avid book reader & writer! Love how you share!Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07178137619890142365noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-75367972502523455362009-04-24T12:56:00.000-04:002009-04-24T12:56:00.000-04:00That is a beautiful story. You are a very talented...That is a beautiful story. You are a very talented writer. Have a wonderful weekend!Cascia Talberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12001701584084843029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-90581800954900096272009-04-24T12:50:00.000-04:002009-04-24T12:50:00.000-04:00Very amusing and entertaining, though I suspect ou...Very amusing and entertaining, though I suspect our pooches might not think so.<br /><br />The characters would have lost any sympathy from me, though, if they'd been ticks.<br /><br />Nasssssttyyyy tickses. We hates them, we do.Hoomihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02973191696885626922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-24099308941158613672009-04-24T12:27:00.000-04:002009-04-24T12:27:00.000-04:00Hehe... you had me going there. I kept wondering ...Hehe... you had me going there. I kept wondering why they were raising and waving limbs and not hands or arms. Then I thought, "Oh well, I guess that's just the way this story is going."<br /><br />The-e-e-e-e-en I realized they were the flees and the children weren't going to flee. HEHE.<br /><br />Great story.<br />KarleneAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06589288496033926632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-22480419062043846332009-04-24T11:10:00.000-04:002009-04-24T11:10:00.000-04:00This is so very good! Love the flow of the dialogu...This is so very good! Love the flow of the dialogue, too.Billy Coffeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08988347213957444145noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-70033074119815471222009-04-24T10:17:00.000-04:002009-04-24T10:17:00.000-04:00I always love reading your stories. You come from ...I always love reading your stories. You come from such a unique point of view that drives me towards the ending to figure out the "big picture."Patrickhttp://www.patrickgwhalen.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-71604500290801252062009-04-24T08:40:00.000-04:002009-04-24T08:40:00.000-04:00The whole time I was trying to figure out what O-G...The whole time I was trying to figure out what O-G-D meant...ha ha ha!<br /><br />Oh...the dreaded mist!<br /><br />thanks, JO!Yvonne Blakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08710596077769759997noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-11719288998613649402009-04-24T08:38:00.000-04:002009-04-24T08:38:00.000-04:00giggle... I forgot that I had read this before, un...giggle... I forgot that I had read this before, until I got to the end. You got me again!<br /><br />I had to go back and read it again, to pick up your clues.<br /><br />Funny, funny!<br /><br />I love the characterization of the kids.<br />Great writing!Yvonne Blakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08710596077769759997noreply@blogger.com