tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post5934377976859907463..comments2024-01-12T18:05:30.697-05:00Comments on Joanne Sher: Editor/Proofreader : Friday Fiction: "Our Loss"Joanne Sherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07656727089667265580noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-48558283194112669132009-05-03T17:06:00.000-04:002009-05-03T17:06:00.000-04:00Oh, Jo! I remember this one! Love it!!Oh, Jo! I remember this one! Love it!!Patty Wysonghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01689649950598288481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-85626897790970446752009-05-03T13:28:00.000-04:002009-05-03T13:28:00.000-04:00I remember this one! I loved again the second time...I remember this one! I loved again the second time, maybe even more knowing in advance who the MC was. The placement of the concluding verse is PERFECT and gave me chills.Catrina Bradleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759918426263780732noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-23200747569977687092009-05-02T23:45:00.000-04:002009-05-02T23:45:00.000-04:00Won't it be great when his defeat is complete? I ...Won't it be great when his defeat is complete? I can't wait!Betsy Markmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13600148899348868100noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-60020269156654261652009-05-02T12:24:00.000-04:002009-05-02T12:24:00.000-04:00Could feel the tension in this. Incredible.Could feel the tension in this. Incredible.LauraLee Shawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06092672958394657296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-24410330022248939662009-05-01T16:52:00.000-04:002009-05-01T16:52:00.000-04:00You have many great lines throughout this story, b...You have many great lines throughout this story, but this one especially caught my attention: "You will lose all you have reaching for something you will never possess." This becomes our human dilemma, as well. You did such a good job of bringing this scenario to life.Sharlyn Guthriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01879828989850465268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-37349696987497176292009-05-01T14:50:00.000-04:002009-05-01T14:50:00.000-04:00I've often wondered what it must have been like Sa...I've often wondered what it must have been like Satan decided he could go it alone--what a foolish thought. Very intriguing, Jo.Dee Yoderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09496759876816112506noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-24600957146760336892009-05-01T13:14:00.000-04:002009-05-01T13:14:00.000-04:00Wonderful! I wondered - at first - who was looking...Wonderful! I wondered - at first - who was looking in the mirror, but then when 'Michael' came in . . . <br /><br />Loved this story. You made Lucifer and Michael come to life.Teresa Lee Rainey . . .https://www.blogger.com/profile/16675464473320511318noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-58523949522131739832009-05-01T11:48:00.000-04:002009-05-01T11:48:00.000-04:00Very good, Jo! I especially liked this: You will l...Very good, Jo! I especially liked this: You will lose all you have reaching for something you will never possess."<br />Well done!Sherri Wardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02370897359440297281noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-40466821923091722872009-05-01T09:47:00.000-04:002009-05-01T09:47:00.000-04:00Ah, good story.Ah, good story.Lynn Squirehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17493660128797850584noreply@blogger.com