tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post330574202223680891..comments2024-01-12T18:05:30.697-05:00Comments on Joanne Sher: Editor/Proofreader : Handmaiden To A Princess (rough draft excerpt): Friday FictionJoanne Sherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07656727089667265580noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-8720257314384963742010-02-15T11:48:41.669-05:002010-02-15T11:48:41.669-05:00So phenomenal, Jo. WowZER.So phenomenal, Jo. WowZER.LauraLee Shawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06092672958394657296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-25342622899464192252010-02-13T08:59:07.115-05:002010-02-13T08:59:07.115-05:00That's a rough draft??? Loved the dialogue!That's a rough draft??? Loved the dialogue!dandelionfleurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09857030670523739785noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-86044285192263610832010-02-12T22:46:01.809-05:002010-02-12T22:46:01.809-05:00What a brave girls! I love it, Jo! I cannot imagi...What a brave girls! I love it, Jo! I cannot imagine the mood swings that man must have had. Wow!Patty Wysonghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01689649950598288481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-19479065025765378972010-02-12T20:02:30.016-05:002010-02-12T20:02:30.016-05:00Ooh, good! Not bad for a rough draft! I like the w...Ooh, good! Not bad for a rough draft! I like the way Michal was able to calm her father down. Good job!Sara Harricharanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07050427684753490067noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-15312987140393846782010-02-12T15:14:23.426-05:002010-02-12T15:14:23.426-05:00I like your portrayal of Saul. I'm sure his t...I like your portrayal of Saul. I'm sure his temperament was very much like this. Wonderful!Sharlyn Guthriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01879828989850465268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-27516034147255653572010-02-12T13:10:13.291-05:002010-02-12T13:10:13.291-05:00Riveting!Riveting!Catrina Bradleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759918426263780732noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-83317400332924065042010-02-12T12:19:04.967-05:002010-02-12T12:19:04.967-05:00You do so well with bible stories. Enjoyed this on...You do so well with bible stories. Enjoyed this one!Sherri Wardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02370897359440297281noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8999930258339428520.post-27103733446924216032010-02-12T08:37:06.495-05:002010-02-12T08:37:06.495-05:00Ahhh...beautiful! Well done (even in the rough dr...Ahhh...beautiful! Well done (even in the rough draft form)! This is going to be a great book when it's done.Yvonne Blakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08710596077769759997noreply@blogger.com